Friday 27 May 2016
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Today at school we was learning to do a character description about superhero and it was really cool also we did about physical feathers and behaviours and when we finshed it we did a sentence and when we finshed the writing we did the success criteria.It was impotant because it has success criteria.
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Kia orana Hadiya. Writing about Superhero's sounds super exciting! I really like how you have explained the writing process you used today. Parts of your comment didn't make sense because it only had one full stop. Quick tip: remember to reread your comment to check it makes sense. If you do this in a quiet voice you can often hear when you naturally stop talking at the end of a setnence. That is where you need to put a full stop. Thank you for sharing you learning.
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Kia orana Mrs Fortes
ReplyDeleteThank you for your positive, thoughtful and helpful comment.That is really lovely that you have did a positive thoughtful and helpful comment.Thank you for sharing the comment